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skleggle
1st Apr 2014, 10:00 AM

These first two pages are a slightly different size from the rest of the comic, because I did them a while ago, before I figured out what size I wanted the pages to be. Whoops.

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Sajan Rai
1st Apr 2014, 10:46 AM

Enjoying all the subtle detail work here, and I like these frames at the bottom. But i'll have to dish out some criticism too, I think the speech bubbles stick out way too much (particularly the ones in white.)It's only a suggestion, but maybe try using sliiightly off-white/off-black colours for those, so that they don't look too super-imposed on the artwork.
Otherwise, thumbs up.

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skleggle
1st Apr 2014, 1:56 PM

Thank you, I might play with the bubbles some in future pages :)

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Sajan Rai
1st Apr 2014, 1:58 PM

Cool! I should say that the shapes of them are pretty cool.

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Stever
1st Apr 2014, 11:39 AM

Great page, I love the bottom left panel. Also, I think the speech bubbles look fine, I especially love the black ones.

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skleggle
1st Apr 2014, 1:57 PM

Thank you!

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Hell Car
2nd Apr 2014, 9:10 AM

Lovely page. Really funky layout.

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skleggle
2nd Apr 2014, 1:44 PM

Thanks!

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alston123
9th Apr 2014, 9:53 AM

I am very intrigued.

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